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Astral projection

Unencumbered by my body mass and girth
I fly along at the speed of whim
Unconcerned about physical attributes
I can focus on the joy and beauty of my vantage point
The world below and out in front of me, opens
The world of noise and doubt inside of me, closes
In this place of "betweens" I find solace
In this place of "infinites" I find myself

****for the favorite mode of transportation contest****

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  1. Date: 8/9/2010 9:08:00 AM
    Congratulations Jim on your win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Your Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 8:46:00 PM
    Very nice! I liked the thought and imagination you put towards this contest. Congratulations on getting a mention for this piece!

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 9:41:00 PM
    I knew someone that said their grandma did this. I think it would be so wonderful to do too!! I envy you if you ever really experienced it! congrats in the contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 8:24:00 AM
    Now THIS is creative, Jim. Best one I've read for the contest. Congratulations on your success. Love, Carolyn (Daver Austin should read this -- he wrote a novel about astral projection)

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 9:48:00 PM
    Congrats on your HM win, Jim

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 9:35:00 PM
    Congrats Jim on your HM in BG's contest with this super write on Astral Planing.. fabulous concept and all too true.. once u have tried it.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 9:32:00 PM
    Different and I like that. Congrats and thank you for participating in my contest. BG

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 4:00:00 PM
    Beautiful Jimmy!!!Love it~It ring a familiar cord. Quite nice~Rick