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All the things you should know All the swings you’ve taken on me But haven’t noticed at all And there goes the things you won’t know Can’t you see all I got to tell you? Can’t you tell just by the sound of my steps? And as it seems you won’t notice at all And I won’t tell you, not now, not tomorrow Till you notice what have you done How does that stomping on my dreams Dragging all I know down What I thought was concrete now is just flour on the floor. So by now all I got to tell you Is, ask me please Just the right time, the right words and everything fine. And it seems that here I’ll be for eons With all this around me And you don’t seem to care You don’t care at all With my broken past, and you can’t see it And there it goes my hope Within this forest I don’t see a way out And guarding what’s left it’s all I have. And still you don’t care. ~Anna

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on going into the second round in the PoetrySoup Contest..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Anna. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:57:00 AM
this is one excellent peace of work thank you duncan
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:52:00 AM
ANNA, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:52:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! ANNA, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/12/2010 2:09:00 PM
Anna, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2010 5:29:00 AM
Congrats Anna on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Anna what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2010 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Anna. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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