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Below is the poem entitled Ashes which was written by poet Carl Fraser. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sifting ashes from a brass urn
They fall from my fingertips
As the last goodbye falls from my lips
Tears draining from a well within
I never knew i had
Ashes that do your smile injustice
Ashes that can never again be kissed
I set you free from the mountaintop
Your last wish sails away in the mountians mist,
My lover, my best friend.
The better half of my heart
Forever missed.

Copyright © Carl Fraser

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:36:00 AM
    Very touching poem!

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:25:00 AM
    A warm and touching write Carl xx

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:15:00 PM
    Hello Carl, I'm really admiring the way you went deep with the image during your poem. Almost long the image in a movie called "30 days of night" well without the whole vampire thing going on. I felt the love leave you like ashes when they fly into the wind... a sad thing the word ashes... hope you are well....always your friend LINDA

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
    Carl a very well crafted verse, I like....David

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 12:35:00 PM
    Very moving. A picture in poetry of your loss.