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The light soaks the soul
Taken beyond physical 
Earth, sky become one.

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  1. Date: 6/13/2015 7:17:00 PM
    wow.. stunning

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 9:12:00 AM

  1. Date: 3/14/2010 2:19:00 PM
    great hiaku thanks for comment and dude i like it better than sir

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 6:30:00 AM
    This is beautiful, Lance. Congratulations! Best Wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 9:28:00 PM
    congrat.on your placing with this wonderful Haiku--Charma

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 1:52:00 AM
    Thank you all for your kind words, it is a shame that what i consider to be one of my least challenging poems receives so much attention, but hey, i'm still grateful for the love sent my way and it will be returned tenfold. pea's and love

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 6:43:00 PM
    Very nice it...Marty P.S. if it's in the contest...good luck...

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 11:42:00 AM
    Congratulations Lance, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 11:13:00 AM
    Very nice! Congratulations on placing with this piece. This really sounds like a genuine haiku.

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 6:50:00 PM
    good write, enjoyed today!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 10:16:00 AM
    Excellent Haiku Lance, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 11:57:00 PM
    Congrats on your success Lance Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 2:56:00 PM
    What an uplifting view. Made me smile. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 6:53:00 AM
    Wonderful, uplifting haiku, Lance! Congratulations on your win! Also, thank you for your sweet comments. Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 3:52:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 3:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Lance. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 9:56:00 PM
    Congrats, Lance, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved winning haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 9:35:00 PM
    Lance, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 11/20/2009 5:57:00 PM
    A lovely, inspiring haiku. Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/20/2009 4:54:00 PM
    Beautiful Haiku, Hope you're entering it in Raul's contest! Thanks for sharing. Have a great Thanksgiving with yours! Love Light Patty