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As Two Become One

As two become one This beautiful day Sealed with a kiss And a ring to say I will love you my darling Till my dying day Wrap you in rainbows Of bright love each day Cherish every moment And each word you say Each tear that you cry I will kiss away Replace it with laughter That brightens your day Warm your heart In the coldest of days Stand by your side Come what may Together as one We will glow each day In the bright light of love Till our dying day

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David Scott

Date: 2/12/2013 12:23:00 PM

nice pattern here and flow and full of love and emotion like it a lot this one xxx davidscott

Autry Emanuel

Date: 1/27/2013 8:12:00 AM

oneness togetherness i like it

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/27/2013 10:20:00 AM

Thank you autry, glad you enjoyed, love Elizabeth

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 1/27/2013 7:26:00 AM

the last two poems are both killer.unconditional love:the last three lines i think sum up what one who has truly loved feels but cannot weave words the way you did.you must be a wonderful person to love and be loved.and thanks for always keeping up with my poetry.you are part of a small club and as woody allen said when the friars didn't want him as a member"i wouldn't want to be part of a club that would want me as a member anyway" you can write and move even a sceptic like me ~free cee!~

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/27/2013 10:19:00 AM

Thank you Jeffry, love ya too xox