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As two become one

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As two become one

As two become one
This beautiful day
Sealed with a kiss
And a ring to say
I will love you my darling
Till my dying day
Wrap you in rainbows
Of bright love each day
Cherish every moment
And each word you say
Each tear that you cry
I will kiss away
Replace it with laughter
That brightens your day
Warm your heart
In the coldest of days
Stand by your side
Come what may
Together as one
We will glow each day
In the bright light of love
Till our dying day

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:23:00 PM
    nice pattern here and flow and full of love and emotion like it a lot this one xxx davidscott

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:12:00 AM
    oneness togetherness i like it

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 1/27/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you autry, glad you enjoyed, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:26:00 AM
    the last two poems are both killer.unconditional love:the last three lines i think sum up what one who has truly loved feels but cannot weave words the way you must be a wonderful person to love and be loved.and thanks for always keeping up with my are part of a small club and as woody allen said when the friars didn't want him as a member"i wouldn't want to be part of a club that would want me as a member anyway" you can write and move even a sceptic like me ~free cee!~

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 1/27/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jeffry, love ya too xox