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As She Spreads Her Wings

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As She Spreads Her Wings

As she spreads her wings long and full
Being free - heart, mind and soul
She breathes effortlessly
Steady winds to help her soar
Being free - hear, mind and soul
A flight taken strong and bold
Steady winds to help her soar
Never minding what's in store
A flight taken strong and bold
She breathes effortlessly
As she spreads her wings long and full

For Catie Lindsey's Pantoum Contest

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  1. Date: 8/18/2010 8:40:00 AM
    Such a graceful and flowing poem. I especially like the last two lines! Thanks for commenting on my poem "Poetess." Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 11:48:00 AM
    I love how easy this reads and flowing, just like a little angel. Great job you did and I can't see that it won, but it sure deserved it! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 10:21:00 AM
    thank you for comment hope you do well in contest enjoyed reading really liked your poem on faith with love in Christ jesus

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 4:24:00 AM
    I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Kimberly. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 5:54:00 PM
    A vibrant, energetic proclamation of freedom, Kimberly! Great use of this intriguing pantoum form. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 2:51:00 PM
    Awesome write and imagery, Kim. An inspiration indeed. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.