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As My Path

Gnarled trees My path is here Beside the trees They twine around the path Old, ancient with many years As my path
Form Vignette Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's ""A Road Still Driven"" contest 12/8/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/9/2012 8:40:00 PM
Nice one for his contest. it's vignette, huh? You are great at doing so many of the short forms.
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:09:00 PM
the path betrod, was older still, when Cain n Abel , climbed the hill :) good one mate!
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Date: 12/9/2012 1:07:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by..Sometimes we travel the same path too long and need a change...Sara
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Date: 12/9/2012 10:54:00 AM
all the best Russell I am sure this must do well xx
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Date: 12/9/2012 8:56:00 AM
Russell, this is a beauty, a wonderful Vignette, I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I so enjoyed reading your poetry today. Constance
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:44:00 AM
clever write, my friend
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Date: 12/9/2012 5:16:00 AM
Russell I just love your use of metaphor here, a great analogy, very well done and good luck...David
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:06:00 PM
Another outstanding one Russell. I really love the way you construct your writes. Rollo
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:35:00 PM
I love this one. Very scenic and good luck in the contest! -JuliMichelle
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