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Below is the poem entitled AS MISTY RAIN COMES TO EVOKE SPRING'S BEAUTY which was written by poet Andrew Crisci. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Farther than the semi-dark hickory hill,
clouds gather over the picturesque valley
of this vast region engulfed by a chill...
as misty rain comes to evoke spring's beauty!

Its gently pelting raindrops slowly quench the trees' thirst,
flowers return to hasn't rained in fourteen weeks;
morning and noon with only sun and no soothing breeze...
Nature was too arid and farmers expected the worst!

Fall, warm raindrops, slowly fall until late evening
to make room for a clearer sky with an ascending moon;
will only lovers await nightfall while those crickets croon?
Rejoice gleaming roses...your petals will overjoy the living!  

Finally the whitest moon reappears into the Heavens,
it will not miss another night and lovers who'll feel dilly;
why did it wait behind clouds as misty rain came to evoke spring's beauty?
Oh, let those moon rays reach me and make this motionless body dance! 

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  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:45:00 AM
    Congrats on a wonderful win, Andrew! I enjoyed reading and love the imagery of the rain falling after the and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:17:00 AM
    ANDREW, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:42:00 PM
    Brelated. Congratulations Andrew. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:54:00 PM
    How eloquent you write Andrew. It reminds me of painting by Ruben's. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:31:00 PM
    What a beautiful write. I love the way the words flow, well done. So nice. Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Andrew on a super win xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Andrew. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol