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As Lovers Fall

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As Lovers Fall

I shall dream of you
As the darkness comes
Do not broken hearts
Understand the numb
What reason is this?

A broken heart
Calls out a name
In lovers arms
Be still the shame

Twisted tales
Come undone



Written for Catie's 
"Hex" Contest

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  1. Date: 2/16/2010 8:32:00 PM
    "In lovers arms be still the shame . . ." This is a line which books are written about. Very moving.

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 2:17:00 AM
    This is really heartfelt and moving, Michael :) wishing you all the best in the contest :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 12:19:00 AM
    Congrats on your recent contest success Michael.Rgds Brian & best wishes with this one.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 3:58:00 AM
    Wow, beautiful writing Michael...Raul

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 11:19:00 PM
    Touching and deep..beautiful..Charma:)

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 10:32:00 PM
    Beauiful poem Michael. David