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As i lay in my bed

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As i lay in my bed

As i lie in my lovely warm bed
Listening to the wind outside
I think about my Friends
Wondering if i have really tried.

Tried to make people happy
Helped them when asked
Bothered to listen to them
Or was i just too laxed

My patience isnt  my strongest point
Not with people anyway
But animals can have  all my time
To walk them and to play.

Hope my friends realise
Friendship hold no bounds
I dont really  mean it 
The way it sounds.

When i am grumpy
It's the pain thats speaking
Not the way i'm thinking
Not the words i'm seeking

But friends understand this
Look past what is said
Know the real me
As I lay in my bed.

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:28:00 PM
    This is what you think about when you're lying in bed? I know about a lack of patience, that's one of my strong points, I mean defects haha. Nice poem Estrella brillosa.

    Date: 2/4/2013 1:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Wayland...Seren
  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:16:00 AM
    You are starting to remind me of myself. It brings a smile to my face.. :o)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 4:43:00 AM
    excellent!!! true friends indeed

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:55:00 AM
    A good friend always care ....(even in bed) - well written poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 9:51:00 PM
    I liked it very much.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 1:41:00 PM
    very nice seren your friends understand .love this poem