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As I hid

As I hid behind the darkness of Spring's cool night there she stood dreaming

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  1. Date: 8/17/2015 9:13:00 PM
    James, beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 6:22:00 AM
    This is a jewel you got here James, glad I came across it.. oh yeah I dropped you soupmail as well :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 8:11:00 AM
    REviewing my fav poems today and saw this gem again! Hi there. have a great weekend!!

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 4:47:00 PM
    This is an excellent piece. I hope it's not a Goddess you're observing. This would be much worse than the muzzle of a Winchester. Hahahahah! You go dude! Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 4:56:00 PM
    well wow is right! this makes ones imagination soar! well done indeed. James, thank you so much for all those wonderful comments you thoughtful, kind man. what a delightful treat and I assure you it is more appreciated than I can express. thank you thank you!!! : )) xoxo

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 10:36:00 AM
    WOW! What a great Monoku, James!! The ending is amazing. It's going to my favs. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 8:45:00 AM
    James, i just love how your words always leave the reader to finish of your poetry by picturing them > another gem >> James

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 6:27:00 AM
    Simply beautiful!

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:56:00 PM
    Thankxxx for your many wonderful and uplifting comments today James.. u have inspired and I too am an impatient lady .. but the contests are quite addictive and so I feel the need to create to enter them.. challenging myself I guess... luv to u and Noah... from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:11:00 PM
    been on both sides of this lens....well penned! JP!

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 5:17:00 PM
    Great short write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 3:41:00 PM
    This is really awesome, JAmes!! A fav!

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 6:29:00 AM
    beautiful monoku James. Charma

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 6:11:00 PM
    I enjoyed the images

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
    Oh, I can picture it..nice one. BG

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 5:03:00 PM
    love it! JP!!!! ROCK-ON! BROTHER!!! jimbo

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 4:19:00 PM
    The image of this girl comes through so clearly, James. Keep watching out for her! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 4:12:00 PM
    nice one

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 3:52:00 PM
    very nice ~ a treat for the imagination ! Nice dream~you've got me thinking of her~Thanks~Rick