Arson Tonight

My passion burns like arson tonight
this fire yes, I did ignite
I was the dead oak tree, your provided the gasoline...

All consuming, flames licking the sky
screams of terror, then my sighs
I played with matches, and got burnt, no lesson here can be unlearnt.

I ruined my friendship and lover too
mixing them together, I should have knew
the oldest proverb in the book, love and lust can be mistook

Why I chanced it, I’ll never know
I’d rather have my friend back, the lust can now go
Its a mingling that cannot be undone, I’d wish it’d change with the rising sun....

Why, I pray ?
Did I screw this up!

andreatravis
copyright10-31-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/31/2012 1:09:00 PM
* Also, I Am Going To Favour This Beautiful Reflection And Treasure Of You, Sweet Beautiful Andrea. Thank You, For Your Kind And Priceless Visit; Quite Lovely. Happy Halloween. My Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/31/2012 1:06:00 PM
‡ I'm Listening Unto Lionel Richie's Song Right Now Called, 'Truly.' I Love That Beautiful Heart's Melody, Sweet Beautiful Andrea. After Viewing This Your Own Priceless Heart's Profoundly Beautiful Verse, I Do Agree If Merely 'Lust' Be The Culprit As A Thief Stealing Something Pure And Beautiful From One's Life Then, Yesss, Quench Its Flames Within The Crytsal Waters Called, 'Love.' I Really Dig Your Poetry. Your Beauty's Passion Paints Your Splendours Wonderfully. My Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:15:00 PM
Do not go over the line in a friendship - it will never go well. - A very good poem Andrea. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2012 1:21:00 AM
wonderful poem yes big difference between love and lust, love lizabeth
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