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Armed With Bravery

armed with bravery the brawny battler excites my heart beats ever faster and my eyes open wider with expectation his sword glistens in the sun like his bronzed muscles good shall overcome in the arena today By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, May 24, 2012 for Choka for a Chokehold contest (Amy Green)

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Date: 6/7/2012 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Amy's contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 8:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Your poem very well supported its title.
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Date: 6/6/2012 7:05:00 PM
RHONDA Congratulations with your wonderful win, In AMY GREEN'S contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:28:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win Light & Love
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:18:00 PM
i like that - "armed with bravery" great line and title. i always think good will overcome too. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/26/2012 8:58:00 PM
" Great Piece, Loved It! Thanks for taking the time to read B-52 Glad you Liked It. Carma"
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Date: 5/26/2012 4:30:00 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading ..I am glad that I chose this one to read this evening...Thanks for stopping by my blog..I am feeling better now..I hope that the bug is gone..Thanks for entering my contest..Sara
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Date: 5/24/2012 10:59:00 PM
great poetry here ...vivid scene too... yes storys handed down bout gg Joe
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:17:00 PM
WELL DONE. I sure hope she accepts this form the way I researched it to be: a poem that can go on indefinitely using that repeating syllable count!
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:14:00 PM
Very we4ll written and I wish you the best of luck. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 5/24/2012 10:36:00 AM
Rhonda I think you will strike hard with one, good luck..David
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:19:00 AM
This is a fantastic and an honorary write! I really enjoyed your lines, "the brawny battler excites, my heart beats ever faster" what a great combination! I love your poem tons Rhonda! Excellent Work!!
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:34:00 AM
Lovely written Rhonda, luck to you in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise
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