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Are we there yet

Are we there yet?

Dark isn't; yet the night..!

 Black though; desires are.."

Deeper shaded than perceptions..

Illusions alluding; pretending unto inclusion

Despite the truth precluding.. 

Yet there we are..! 

copyright Joe

I would have liked to have been able to put a question mark
in the title of this write; but as we know I could not, so I had
to do a repeat title on the poem page I think it detracts from the write though.."


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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:45:00 AM
    destination illusion... distraction disillusion... Life is meaningful when we get there; to the land of truth... Love... Angel

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:32:00 PM
    you are a big kidster, Joe!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:19:00 AM
    about what I said. I didn't mean to say there were some comments of yours I did not like. I just meant some of them were FUN and the others were more normal! Nothing wrong with that, Joe! and always your comments are interesting!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:13:00 PM
    Joe, this stirs the side of me that is now happily tamed..hahah..I really enjoyed glad to read a new one of yours..I too understand the frustration u have with the punctuation. Isn't it bizarre that it can't be fixed???...always, gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:29:00 AM
    very deep and intense thoughts Joe with exquisite rhyme and strong wording.. great job luv .. and I understand about title punctuation .. it is impossible to do though a few poets seem to be able to insert quotation marks .. but none other ..

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 2:34:00 PM
    Razorback would be fun...Interesting work..Not sure exactly the interpertation though..Yes, in the title area there are other things that won't work...Thanks for stopping by...No matter how swift the decent I would not want to go back or look back..Sara

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:37:00 AM
    nice write Joe

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 10:24:00 AM
    I read Andrea's comment. I got a different idea from this one, which is that the whole seems rife with confusion, frustration. Enjoyed, Joe - had to read several times. Correct me if I'm wrong. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Hey, THANKS for posting a new poem for us to see, and ME LIKEY! Yep, I know what you mean about the titles. Why the heck won't they allow ( ) or ? and other symbols. It is beyond my comprehension. Also, I thought the last line of this poem was cute!

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:12:00 PM
    A nebulous write, Joe. Lots of darkness happening here...shades and shadows? Illusions, pretense, but "truth precluding". Confusing piece, Joe! Best wishes, Love, Mikki