Ardor

An ardor for poetic expression penned
Those emotion filled romantic lines drew
Passion reaching forth sweet love uncondemned
Armour poured out 'pon pages like morn's dew 

Christ's passion far surpasses human's love
With patience He looked down 'pon man and earth
Patiently waited coming as the Dove
Amazing grace would transcend with His birth

Passion waited for eons and eons
Patiently longing to redeem mankind
Creatures whom He loved for generations
He waits now for them to His will aligned

Blood poured forth 'pon sad Golgotha's hill
Passion's patience whispers come of own freewill

finis'

Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta
Contest: Passion Pays, Not Patience
Passion without character trait of patience can result in a disaster.....
Written: This September 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/23/2013 12:58:00 AM
Congratulations ....Seren
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:32:00 PM
Fantastic piece, so well expressed. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:41:00 PM
a nice winning poem Sara... goodnight...Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:36:00 PM
Yes how often do people consider how much raw passion Christ displayed for lost mankind..' Congrats on winning.!
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:09:00 AM
The only poem here, that pours with faith and passion of His love. Perfectly done, Sara!! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:52:00 AM
beautiful, inspiration sonnet...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:53:00 AM
congrats on being placed Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Sara, with this lovely sonnet
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:27:00 PM
Lovely sonnet and inspiring message.
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Date: 9/11/2013 12:15:00 PM
I'd prefer morning's dew. But it's a great start.
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:58:00 AM
this is lovely cannot wait for the finish...
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Date: 9/10/2013 2:16:00 PM
designed to last through the glory of the One, sara... i will see this through.. so divine!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/10/2013 10:03:00 AM
amazing it is Sara, a joy of light reading your poem...Linda
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