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Ardent Red

You cannot let go, cannot forget Everything in the night However easy it may seem Smother a star and stay beneath the eyelids Smother too the bitter moon with a cloud Ardent red, colour my silence Ardent red, on a smile that died Ardent red, to hide my pain In the night I lose myself With the night I forgive you I hide you beneath the ribs that hurt With the bitter moon When everything I desire is ardent red I don’t want to lose you to the world outside Remain unchanged- unquenchable red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/2/2025 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:37:00 AM
DEEP WRITE. LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:21:00 PM
epic write Luci, you are an excellent poet. SKAT
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Date: 8/22/2009 4:19:00 AM
Deep write Luci, very interesting>>James
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