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Architects Warning

“Oh Prisoner,” Warned the architect, “I mean no disrespect. But you can’t climb out of jail; These walls aren’t built to scale.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/8/2011 4:53:00 AM
Good one..Enjoyed the humor..He might apply some musical notes and use them for a rope..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes the word is hoar's frost..I did 'oar's leaving off the h..Thanks...Sara
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Date: 2/7/2011 4:36:00 PM
funny stuff!!
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:38:00 PM
ACES, James! What a clever play on words. Very, very creative and funny limerick. Way to go! (Did you mean "no disrespect?) Love this one. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:03:00 PM
Nice write on the architects warning
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Date: 2/6/2011 12:38:00 PM
A short write, but a good one. I have one question: In your third line, did you really want to include "no" instead of "on"?
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