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April Rain

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April Rain

                                                       drops of 
                                                   diamonds fall
                                                   on April days
                                   landing on the petals of red daisy's 
                               sinking into the earth to start new seeds
                                                     for a season
                                                     that begins
                                                         with a

written for ~Flowers n Stones~ contest
1/14/2012 by MJF

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  1. Date: 1/21/2012 9:09:00 PM
    conngrats Michael luv on a stupendous win for brilliant poetry ... well hope those GMEN don't let us down tomorrow.. luv to see them in SB .. hope u are well my WK... JG .. well not so hot.. have a drainage tube in hand for infection ..oh.. will it ever end? or be the same again? xoxo

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:45:00 AM
    wow! so sweet, i wish i have an April rain Michael.

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 1:43:00 AM
    sweetest of cheers to you for the shining win, michael :)huggs! ,,lovely!

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 9:25:00 PM
    So sweetly simple and beautiful. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 3:03:00 PM
    Congrats on your winnning work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 1:04:00 PM
    For this lovely thanks you and wishing you congratulation on your win, bl

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Love the symbolism Michael. Well done. Congratulations

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Michael! Read about this form and my brain started to shut down--will not try anytime soon. Obviously, however, you have mastered it and magic happened at the same time--you could have written "Shape" for the form because it looks like a diamond ring! So often the simplest says the most in more ways. Thanks, Craig (Congrats)

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 7:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 6:06:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning place in the contest. This is so sweet...

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 4:45:00 PM
    Very pretty write. I hope it does well in Tracie's contest.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 11:59:00 AM
    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Michael. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:52:00 PM
    Dear MFJ... lots of kissy poems going around... i love the image in this makes me feel like a child dancing around red daisy's after rain fall... me and my muddy shoes enjoying the beginning of a new it...always..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 11:48:00 AM

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 11:24:00 AM
    Michael, you did a great job here for Tracie's contest. Doesn't matter if it is for a contest or not, this double-tetractys stands on its own....and it has me looking out the window, patiently waiting for April to show up again. Best wishes in Tracie's contest!

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Michael my friend as always a joy to read, best of luck, I love this form ..David

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 1/14/2012 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David!!
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Awesome write Michael, I really enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon! Fantastic poem for sure, seeing..." fall..." is really a great line! It's wonderful the way April showers work, love the write about it! Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 9:52:00 AM
    You need an s in season, though you did season this one with beauty, as the beholder, always a pleasure to read your work, love and light, vie

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 1/14/2012 11:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the wonderful comment and for giving me an S. lol. Luv Michael
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 9:41:00 AM
    The way you combined the stone and the flower flows together so beautifully. This is great. Love, Kim PS I think there is a typo on "pedals" should be "petals" Best wishes in the contest.

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 1/14/2012 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes petals. Thought I was on a bike lol. Your comments are always so sweet thank you. Luv Michael
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:31:00 AM
    This is just excellent Michael.Love the imagery very much.Best wishes if for a contest.