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April Rain

Rain drops of diamonds fall on April days landing on the petals of red daisy's sinking into the earth to start new seeds for a season that begins with a kiss. written for ~Flowers n Stones~ contest 1/14/2012 by MJF

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2012 9:09:00 PM

conngrats Michael luv on a stupendous win for brilliant poetry ... well hope those GMEN don't let us down tomorrow.. luv to see them in SB .. hope u are well my WK... JG .. well not so hot.. have a drainage tube in hand for infection ..oh.. will it ever end? or be the same again? xoxo

M.I.A .

Date: 1/21/2012 1:45:00 AM

wow! so sweet, i wish i have an April rain Michael.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/20/2012 1:43:00 AM

sweetest of cheers to you for the shining win, michael :)huggs! ,,lovely!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2012 9:25:00 PM

So sweetly simple and beautiful. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2012 3:03:00 PM

Congrats on your winnning work..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/19/2012 1:04:00 PM

For this lovely thanks you and wishing you congratulation on your win, bl

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/19/2012 8:50:00 AM

Love the symbolism Michael. Well done. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2012 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/19/2012 6:06:00 AM

Congrats on your winning place in the contest. This is so sweet...

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2012 4:45:00 PM

Very pretty write. I hope it does well in Tracie's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2012 11:59:00 AM

Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Michael. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2012 11:52:00 PM

Dear MFJ... lots of kissy poems going around... i love the image in this poem..it makes me feel like a child dancing around red daisy's after rain fall... me and my muddy shoes enjoying the beginning of a new season...love it...always..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/14/2012 11:48:00 AM

SUPERB PIECE MICHAEL LUV.. VIVACIOUS IMAGES OF FLOWERS ANMD STONES AND THE LUV THAT WRAPS IT TOGETHER FOR APRIL... GOOD LUCK.. POSTING MINE SHORTLY.. AS RON TYPES SO PATIENTLY.. HOPE U ARE FEELING BETTER MY WK.. JG IS ..XOXO..

David Williams

Date: 1/14/2012 11:07:00 AM

Michael my friend as always a joy to read, best of luck, I love this form ..David

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 1/14/2012 11:20:00 AM

Thanks David!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/14/2012 10:58:00 AM

Awesome write Michael, I really enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon! Fantastic poem for sure, seeing..."...diamonds fall..." is really a great line! It's wonderful the way April showers work, love the write about it! Excellent Work!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/14/2012 9:41:00 AM

The way you combined the stone and the flower flows together so beautifully. This is great. Love, Kim PS I think there is a typo on "pedals" should be "petals" Best wishes in the contest.

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 1/14/2012 11:06:00 AM

Yes petals. Thought I was on a bike lol. Your comments are always so sweet thank you. Luv Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 1/14/2012 8:31:00 AM

This is just excellent Michael.Love the imagery very much.Best wishes if for a contest.