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April 18

This is nice I said
You smiled and I knew you agreed
We made love like drowning in the ocean
Surfing the waves of our desire
When the currents dragged me under
You were my rescuer

I felt so beautiful with you and still do
How long those hours lasted
Perhaps God had mercy on me after all
I know you were a blessing
I was almost lost at sea
Loves beacon reached out to me

Wherever I am now
You are always with me
In that fortress we built
When we lay in each other’s arms
And said those words we meant
Things unspoken before
Now strewn across the floor
With every shed item of clothing

I laughed and wept and recalled
The past and everything I had felt
Everything that I needed to
Everything that you have now replaced.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Dear Michael, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Winning POEM " April 18 " in the contest " One of YOUR Greatest Days " sponsored by Dan Kearley. I have to agree with Mandy A vivid memory of a most Wonderful day. Also I believe the form would be Free Verse.Again Congratulations. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:21:00 PM
    Michael, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA

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    Date: 3/22/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD. :-)
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 5:01:00 AM
    A beautiful memory Michael, try free verse as the form but I am no expert xx