Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Anvil Dreams

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Anvil Dreams which was written by poet Natalie The Rogue Rhymer. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Best Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Poems

+ Fav Poet

Anvil Dreams

The anvil wallows on his heart 
His dreams, trodden, alas depart
Pride triggers a cursory front
The fierce justification hunt
He steps to nowhere from the start

Copyright © Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Congratultions on your win and your featured poem

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Natalie,(and your new car,lol) you lucky you..:) Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful write. Best regards, Jon

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 3:03:00 PM
    Pride leads to nowhere - wisdom and insight gives this poem a special message. I see it was a winner and it certainly deserves recognition! :)

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 12:53:00 AM
    pressed for time but read your superb piece, nat .. a generic message of delightful cheers for your great win!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:23:00 PM
    Congrats. Natalie on your super win, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 4:22:00 PM
    His steps,,, proof read proof read!!! other than that it's fine. T. S.

    The Rogue Rhymer Avatar Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
    Date: 1/25/2012 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Situation-I really meant "He steps" as in "He walks" I think it's ok as is but I appreciate your concern!
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Wow, I think I've been having "Anvil Dreams" too, Natalie. I like the way you describe pride griggering "a cursory front" and forcing him to step "to nowhere." Awesome poem, my friend, and I see congratulations are in order. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 9:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Natalie

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 7:37:00 PM
    i dont know what it is but its good.

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 7:00:00 AM
    Nat....a consonant is more likely to produce a HARD/STRESS sound than a vowel ...the ANvil WALlows on HIS HEART/ HIS DREAMS TRODDEN aLAS DEpart/PRIDE TRIgers a CURsor y FRONT/the FIERCE JUSTif a CA tion HUNT/ HE STEPS to noWHERE from the START..two small words [and a] [in the] [from the] IF you have them anywhere you have gone off iambic must go UP down UP down /RISE OF VOICE HARD SOUND soft voice low sound [listen to gleensleeves]

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 9:48:00 PM
    Nat,love it.. deep and sad... good luck in the contest,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 6:54:00 PM
    I think Debbie will like this one. I like it.