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Antiquated Art of Astrology

Astrology, antiquated art to reveal the human heart
Mingling elements- earth, air, fire and sea-
Aquarius, Libra and Gemini - brilliant and free
Scorpio persuades, Pisces evades, double regard love as art.

Capricorn, Taurus, financial genius, worldly and smart
Cancer, the Romantic, will get on his knee-
Astrology, antiquated art to reveal the human heart
Mingling elements- earth, air, fire and sea-

Sagittarius- truth teller right from the start
Aries and Virgo, perpetually full of glee
Leo the Lion, brave, strong, carries the key
Each twelve, distinct individuality -perchance you believe-
Astrology, antiquated art to reveal the human heart.

Won 2nd place in the "Rondel" contest by Jared Pickett

A. Green

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Steven Henderson Date: 6/2/2012 6:41:00 AM Like this Amy, considering astrology is a hobby along with an interest in a variety of Divination rituals. we are all connected. Check my recent poem 'A poem all about me', I believe you will catch my drift. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/28/2010 4:36:00 PM Hey congrats Awesome Amy on your 2nd place win in Jared's contest the Rondel... a great write and win.. enjoy.. and thankx for your compliments on all my poetic endeavors for the contests ...see u soon.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/28/2010 10:14:00 AM Congratulations Amy on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Rondel". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/28/2010 9:47:00 AM lovely Amie...hmmm me Virgo? I am seldom full of glee though I best work on me! Light & Love winner lady! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/28/2010 8:00:00 AM In your own unique style..Amy, a wonderful 2nd place winner. Love the migling of the signs of Astrology!! Well done! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/4/2010 9:29:00 AM I really like this. I love astrology and numerology too! So are you a true believer? And what is YOUR sign, Amy? Good luck in this contest here. Luv,Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/3/2010 11:12:00 PM Rondel is fine .. I did all the abba stuff against my poem in front of me... and u did it great... mine is Moulin Rouge Deja Vu... I already asked Jared to go read mine and he gave me some much needed critique but we are friends and live close so I can take it...good luck..this one is a winner girl..luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/3/2010 11:07:00 PM Well I changed it to fit the Sonnet form ..my Christopher died at 5 months old due to a respiratory ailment... they did try to save him.. and it was tragic ..but I think God wanted him.. so there he is watching over us now... OK so now I redid the entry ..let me know whats up as I have to do Rick's too..luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/3/2010 11:03:00 PM NO ..don't I just changed it to fit the Sonnet form...luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/3/2010 10:46:00 PM OH forgot..yeah I WON..thankxxx... that was short and sweet.... luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/3/2010 10:45:00 PM Well this is different and unique Amy.. Jared will flip for it... great subject... where and what did u say about that Gemini..brilliant and free.. so go read my entry for your Tell Me About YOU contest... I swear we are on the same wave length .. or ..great minds think alike... I scare myself at how fast I can write when I am supposed to be resting my eye after my surgery I am typing at 2 am est. ah the creative genius..luv... Login to Reply