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Anticipation....

Lamps lit in the darkness like a jeweled evening gown my soul sings of an emptiness not having you around...but, heartsong's are sung to the brightest star hoping they find you wherever you are... Can you hear me,while I wait to hear you?

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Wilma Neels

Date: 8/15/2010 11:07:00 AM

Wow Jay, this is so beautiful, yearning so visible. Hope you are enjoying your day, thanks for your comment today :) Wilma

De R

Date: 8/15/2010 5:26:00 AM

A sad write, jay. I really liked the comparison 'Lamps lit in the darkness like a jeweled evening gown'. Love can bring you pain sometimes, unfortunately. Emily

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/14/2010 4:41:00 PM

Long time no see. How have you been? This poem hold so much sadness in it. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 7:53:00 AM

I believe our loved ones always hear us if we have a true connection with them, Jay. Many of us can relate to the emptiness of having to reach out to someone who is no longer at our side. Best wishes, Carolyn