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Below is the poem entitled Anticipation.... which was written by poet jay del fierro. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lamps lit in the darkness
like a jeweled evening gown
my soul sings of an emptiness
not having you around...but,
heartsong's are sung to the brightest star
hoping they find you wherever you are...

Can you hear me,while I wait to hear you?

Copyright © jay del fierro

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  1. Date: 8/15/2010 11:07:00 AM
    Wow Jay, this is so beautiful, yearning so visible. Hope you are enjoying your day, thanks for your comment today :) Wilma

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 5:26:00 AM
    A sad write, jay. I really liked the comparison 'Lamps lit in the darkness like a jeweled evening gown'. Love can bring you pain sometimes, unfortunately. Emily

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 4:41:00 PM
    Long time no see. How have you been? This poem hold so much sadness in it. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 7:53:00 AM
    I believe our loved ones always hear us if we have a true connection with them, Jay. Many of us can relate to the emptiness of having to reach out to someone who is no longer at our side. Best wishes, Carolyn