Another Setting Sun Unloved

Further days are passing, lapsing long
Upsetting to unbecoming 
At dawn, always loneliness undaunting 
That continues on...
By inward breaking in

Will it ever come to fruitions end 
The offsetting, untiming, to complete unnerving
This I ask myself, as the sun and I are quickly becoming 
Sinking, drowning friends
Deep into each others night of nexus, merciless and unrelenting

The drag of it, an exasperating friction exhausting
By this not forgetting, beneath the spotlight of a taunting moon
As too soon, again the beginning 
Of, the into giving 
Another phase unto going through

And hence, once again to my own undoing 
Upon this orb I do not move, but yet I am spinning, drifting 
With a consequence left of, more of nothing, more 
But, creeping cracks eroding, what once was forever yours 

Of this tattered soul, that now must face its first inquisition heartbreaking
About a love in a tilted world, serendipitous it seems, only when it's still 
Or, a branding upon a human’s fragile heart 
With "why's" which one will never be fully comprehending
Or rather a hope that may never even be fulfilled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/26/2011 4:15:00 PM
This is a definite favorite. I really enjoyed reading this, it gave me chills, as well as a few tears. I have been there...Kelli
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:00:00 PM
Very stunning write, thank u for recommending it, I enjoyed the read. Thank u also for all your lovely and upspiriting comments...Kelli
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Date: 10/28/2011 1:41:00 PM
How have I missed so many wonderful poems by you? Your kind comments on mine, led me here, and I'm pleased to read such stunning pieces... thanks very much for this opportunity. And thanks very much for the compliments. I am loving your poetry!
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Date: 10/10/2011 8:54:00 PM
so someone does not comprehend you or at all? if the light hurts to break dawn dude, open up the window and let it sting, life is and was always a challenge, its just on a different level, so open up the curtains and sting baby sting, bio time clock messed up, herbal mellatonin, like 3 bucks over the counter. nuff said, excellent style of writing by the way, Lucinda re: Journeydisclaimer:always check with your pharamacist to see if herbal contents will interact negatively and/ or cause harm.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Michael. Love, Carol
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