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Another Setting Sun Unloved

Further days are passing, lapsing long Upsetting to unbecoming At dawn, always loneliness undaunting That continues on... By inward breaking in Will it ever come to fruitions end The offsetting, untiming, to complete unnerving This I ask myself, as the sun and I are quickly becoming Sinking, drowning friends Deep into each others night of nexus, merciless and unrelenting The drag of it, an exasperating friction exhausting By this not forgetting, beneath the spotlight of a taunting moon As too soon, again the beginning Of, the into giving Another phase unto going through And hence, once again to my own undoing Upon this orb I do not move, but yet I am spinning, drifting With a consequence left of, more of nothing, more But, creeping cracks eroding, what once was forever yours Of this tattered soul, that now must face its first inquisition heartbreaking About a love in a tilted world, serendipitous it seems, only when it's still Or, a branding upon a human’s fragile heart With "why's" which one will never be fully comprehending Or rather a hope that may never even be fulfilled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 4:15:00 PM
This is a definite favorite. I really enjoyed reading this, it gave me chills, as well as a few tears. I have been there...Kelli
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:00:00 PM
Very stunning write, thank u for recommending it, I enjoyed the read. Thank u also for all your lovely and upspiriting comments...Kelli
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Date: 10/28/2011 1:41:00 PM
How have I missed so many wonderful poems by you? Your kind comments on mine, led me here, and I'm pleased to read such stunning pieces... thanks very much for this opportunity. And thanks very much for the compliments. I am loving your poetry!
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Date: 10/10/2011 8:54:00 PM
so someone does not comprehend you or at all? if the light hurts to break dawn dude, open up the window and let it sting, life is and was always a challenge, its just on a different level, so open up the curtains and sting baby sting, bio time clock messed up, herbal mellatonin, like 3 bucks over the counter. nuff said, excellent style of writing by the way, Lucinda re: Journeydisclaimer:always check with your pharamacist to see if herbal contents will interact negatively and/ or cause harm.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Michael. Love, Carol
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