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Another Lonely Day

There was this girl I once knew Happy with no worries Had all that she dreamed for Till daddie told her to dream no more Then he left Went away Forgot about her and his family Left her there with so much Hate and anger inside She just cried and cried Till she turned 12 Took her anger out on herself And it lasted till she was 16 Now she stopped Cutting But tears, hate, and pain still fill her heart So She just cry and await Another lonely day...

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Date: 12/31/2008 7:39:00 AM
rEALLY TOUCHED ME. kEEP STRONG. u SEEM WONDERFUL. hAD A NICE CHAT WITH U B4.
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Date: 12/31/2008 12:11:00 AM
truly amazing!! I know you don't know me and I don't know you but I hope you know how special you are, you may not be able to see him but know he's always there and call on him, everyday, every hour, every second and he will answer, give all your burdens, worries, fears, over to him leave them there. My mom always tells me, it's to much to carry it with me, turn it over to the lord and he will work it out. I see it in my life and I hope you see it in yours, look at all the gifts hes given you.
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Date: 12/29/2008 11:58:00 AM
Unbelievably touching. If I can offer a personal reflection, as I'm not a stranger to anger or cutting, I like to think you're (all of us) lonely only when you're completely sure you're alone. Thank you so much.
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