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Another Day At Wally World

Wal-Mart has removed its door greeters, Replacing them with purchase eyes Grabbing receipts at exits Waving them like white flags Yes, they paid! They paid! You may pass; thanks! Do the dance, Pappy, lol!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/23/2009 8:48:00 AM

How true Sandra. Splendid write. What a pain. They don't want us to rip them off like they seem to be ripping us off as of late. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/22/2009 3:03:00 PM

ain't it though?! john h loving iii

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/18/2009 3:36:00 PM

So very well written and I suppose a sign of the times. Nothing more embarrassing than when the sensors at the door goes off because the cashier didn't deactivate the merchandise properly. Well done. Regards Heidie

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/18/2009 3:10:00 AM

We don't have one , over here Aa , but I get your drift in your perfect Nonet .....

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/17/2009 10:13:00 PM

love this nonet! Sandra! and dig readin' your comments on other great poet's work!!! you are one "light-filled soul!" love, jimbo

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/17/2009 8:35:00 PM

Saw the play "Walmartopia" not long ago. Cavernous shopping centers! Interesting work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2009 7:17:00 PM

How true, Alexandra! It always seems humiliating to be asked to show your receipt on the way out of WalMart. We still have door greeters here, but their evil counterparts are waiting in the wings. Great Nonet! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2009 5:38:00 PM

Made me chuckle, nice one>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2009 5:15:00 PM

Love the humor in this Nonet. It sounds like the Wal-Mart here at Christmas when they really check people at the exits. Sara