Angry Man

An Angry Man I am an angry man, and there is nothing I can do I am sick to death of everything and that includes you too You leave your make-up everywhere, like a prostitutes den And yes I know what that looks like; I’ve been in one of them. Your clothes you leave everywhere… Its’ supposed to be men that don’t care I’m sick of it, its time to go Just leave your key and don’t be slow. I never should have let you in All I learnt was perpetual sin. Be gone and get lost give me a break Darken my step no more for heavens sake I won’t be responsible what I do to you If you stick your nose in my life anew.
© 25/06/2012 Entry for contest Unease. Sponsored by: Paula Swanson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/10/2012 5:14:00 AM
I Wonder? powerful and yes the anger comes through, which only a awesome poet can do, remines me of a poem, called Swan Song, that too being a heartbreaker...
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Date: 7/18/2012 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck in Paula's competition..I have a son who says he is always saying that to women..They come and they go..He is the common denominator of the situation though..Sara
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Date: 6/27/2012 3:13:00 PM
WHEW!!! I got your message loud and clear! Beautifully crafted, with neat couplet rhyming and flow. Well done, Mandy!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/27/2012 7:42:00 AM
riveting work... your wrath is well expressed, mandy!.. well done!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:43:00 PM
Now this would make ya uneasy having that guy talking like that to you. Very interesting take on the contest, Mandy. I really loved reading this.
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Date: 6/25/2012 11:40:00 AM
POWERFUL..I am woman hear me roar!! Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:13:00 AM
DIRECT AND POWERFUL... WINING WISHES...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/25/2012 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Elliott xx
Date: 6/25/2012 9:15:00 AM
Wow... talk about 'angry'! I hope this is only 'just a thought' from your vivid imagination... ;-) Terry
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:58:00 AM
imagination yes, the clue being I am a girl ha ha xx
Date: 6/25/2012 8:29:00 AM
nice write Mandy... check out Elliott Bowe's blog called Poetry Battle for all the details and links.... always ...Joseph
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Date: 6/25/2012 8:25:00 AM
lol,a woman that doesn't take care of herself will never be able to take care of her surrounding or you,great write GG
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