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Anger & loss of control

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Anger & loss of control

Senses become ingulfed,
the sound frequencies exit my lips,
black magic pouring fourth,
in a barrage of rage and torment,
self anger, sublimation,
projected then introspected,
hurt, regret, the wounds slashed again,
lacerating our aura, it bleeds
ether and is refilled with bile,
spat in face and broken in
sob, sorrow leaking, a joy
to be speaking, the darkness
subdued by light, having survived 
another long cold night.

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  1. Date: 11/29/2009 8:04:00 PM
    Well done expression my friend :) Thank you for all your kind comments and the reading time you give me. I enjoy you too xo

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 3:08:00 AM
    Interesting topic of anger presented here and the last line says it all when anger is improperly handled. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 6:42:00 PM
    I love this poem even though it's about anger...Marty

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 6:02:00 PM
    I denote a lot of anger but its good to express in words what u feel emotionally .. I like this a lot .. good use of special words and interesting to read... once words of any kind are spoken they cannot be retrieved so we best use them wisely... they last forever once they "exit lips black magic pouring forth" ... luv this line... thankxxx for your comments on my contest poetry.. luv the competitions here on Soup... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 3:38:00 PM
    i luv your poems keep writing dont quit