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Anger(My First Try at a Slam)

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Anger(My First Try at a Slam)

Anger in your eyes
Hate in your words
Yet these words fly by
My unsupecting ears
You yearn to hear
Me cry and see tears
Yet I won't let my fears
Show through my character
And countless times after
You would aplogize and come back
All the while I had my things packed
Baby I'm leaving never to return
Because I count this a lesson learned
I can no longer hide
These feelings inside
And let you abuse my love
So I'll fly like a dove
Away from your presence
And give you the sheer essence
That you were not needed
So before you proceeded 
To give me an earful
I was already out the door 
And away from your anger at the world
And from your pure deceit


**My first try at a Slam.I don't know what I'm doing,so please comment and give some 
advice.**

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  1. Date: 7/22/2010 4:55:00 PM
    I don't know either, keep sharing...(^v^)

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 12:02:00 PM
    Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Jasmine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 12:12:00 AM
    well your angry at someone so you got that right, hope you feel better, and this write ain't true life, we use to have slam but i guess now it's the i don't know form c: definite good try on your first slam