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Below is the poem entitled ANGELIC HALLOWEEN which was written by poet Daniel Cwiak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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    Halloween was coming and the angels thought they'd have some fun,
    Since they sometimes thought of dressing up before the Holy One.

    They all got together and decided to do just that,
    Dress up in devilish costumes...Surprise the Lord like some earthly college frat.

    Each one was to make his costume from the ethereal
    A very inexpensive and unusual type of material.

    Then, when the Lord was looking down at earth
    Don the costumes for some Heavenly mirth.
    It'll be a costume party for us here in our Heavenly abode
    Different from always wearing these white sophisticated robes.

    We'll have a good laugh and God will understand
    We're just having a laugh here in His Heavenly plan.
    The moment came, all the costumes had been made
    And when the Lord looked up, Heaven was a different shade.

    "Something is amiss, here." , He said in the shades of that red hue
     Perhaps I'll  bring Satan here, to find out if this is something new.

     It would be difficult to invite that guest into heaven you see
     As he had been banished for all the eons of centuries.

     But nothing is impossible for the Lord for He can do any feat
     And just when he was to summon Satan, the Angels all shouted

      "Trick or Treat"!

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  1. Date: 10/25/2010 4:20:00 PM
    Very cute poem. I enjoyed reading. Best wishes for the contest. Thank you for the nice comments. Love Scarlett

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:21:00 PM
    funny one... lol

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 3:04:00 PM
    May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry this beautiful Sunday afternoon and thank you for sharing it Dan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 1:16:00 AM
    Very nice, Daniel....and too funny! Great couplets. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 10:00:00 PM
    hahaha, this was too cute, daniel. GREAT approach to this unique contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 12:31:00 PM
    wonderful entry for Tony's contest, much enjoyed

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 11:37:00 AM
    Oh my..great entry..this is a kick. BG

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 10:28:00 AM
    LOL just loved that ending! wonderful made me laugh! Thanks for all your nice comments please give us your wisdom on my blog? Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 10:08:00 AM
    Nice creative write on Halloween that is round the corner, Daniel

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 9:25:00 AM
    nice, Daniel enjoyed your Halloween couplet of fun. Have a Nice one,..p.d.