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Angel Avery

William (Billy) Avery mailman extraordinaire for ten years His beautiful loving wife, Irene, Loved beyond this World I remember the day Billy was skipping down the sidewalks Hey Billy ,what’s up You seem exuberantly Happy today After ten years Irene is no longer barren, I’m going to be a father It’s a Girl ,a gift from heaven , a Princess, a heavenly Angel This is my daughter, my existence, my future Angel Maria Avery The whole town watched the proudest Papa carrying his Angel Door to door ; Here’s your mail this is my daughter Angel Maria The years went on : Angel an Angel growing in Daddy’s heart Sweet sixteen, Learner’s Permit in hand “Daddy can I drive?” How could he say no ; To the Supermarket and right back home Check your mirrors, adjust your seat , Seatbelt; and let’s go slowly How am I doing Daddy, suddenly a thud, Daddy I hit a dog, panic She hit’s the gas instead of the brakes: the oak tree didn’t move Billy woke up ;something warm running in his eyes; ANGEL She lay there covered in blood, Her cell phone; 981 Damn My fingers are to big for these tiny numbers 911 Dispatch What is Your emergency, My daughter and I have been in an accident Is she conscious, No: Is she breathing :I don’t know I can’t move my legs The Ambulance is on the way. ANGEL, ANGEL, A N G E L!! Inspired by Gareth James Contest "Leave Me Hanging"

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Date: 4/27/2010 8:45:00 PM
after the contest, if you are going to continue this.maybe not, but that would be interesting to read the ending.a daughter with the name Angel as well, makes it more of a read in wonder.it's scary how things like this really happen, your description is very clear to see through an image. i like this cliff hanger on your story. good luck, i love you always spirit brother. -Forever your sister spirit, Lynn
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Date: 4/23/2010 3:06:00 PM
Got my attention and drew me in...Good luck in the contest..Should do well...Give us the finishing sequel when the contest is over..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/23/2010 2:45:00 PM
I will hope for a happy ending.Hope you are well.Haven't heard from you for awhile.
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Date: 4/22/2010 8:40:00 PM
Well I am hanging HG and wish u much success in Gareth's suspenseful contest... my entry is "Dragonfly" and everyone seems to like it... they are even calling for an ending by the many soup mails I have received... I hope u write the ending to yours also my silent beau from your forever "Sweetheart"
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