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Andy Mchandy

Andy Mchandy, had skills to ply his trade.
But all he did was lay around like he made it in the shade.
The house he built was made of dreams that popped just like balloons.
And when he woke he was still broke still singing his sad tunes.

Maybe someday he'll find a way to make it without work.
But we all know that that don't pay, you just end up a jerk.
He missed the point when he told the joke.
Now his dreams have all gone up in smoke.

Andrea wanted more. Hope you like. :)

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:26:00 AM
    good title and I like your line "the house he made was made of dreams that popped just like balloons..." nice :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:05:00 AM
    yes this is so good..

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 6:20:00 AM
    i love the title and the way you've used rhyme here. very nice! and, by the way, i so appreciate it when you read a bunch of my poems and comment on them. thank you!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 2:51:00 PM
    hehehe interesting story indolent men are many

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 7:20:00 AM
    I've known a few Andy's in my lifetime... Good poem !!!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Enjoyed this one..There are many of those out there who don't want to work..Sad for their families though..Thanks for your visits to read and comment on my work...Sara

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    Date: 4/2/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    When I went back and reread my work "Thoughts" I realized that I had not do c,d,c,d ending rhyme scheme..I need to go back and do some work on it..Sara
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 5:14:00 AM
    Would have been better to be "randy Andy" I think; takes a bit of charm but a whole lot less effort. Tee hee! :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 11:13:00 PM
    hahaha, and I see this guy has my nic name. I like that Mchandy, the poor old bloke. Handy Andy, isn't that a nursery rhyme somewhere? Thanks for posting this new one. I hope others will soon take a look!