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And So He Desires Both

Life without a dream is like a dream without a life And so he desires both A life without water is like water without a life And so he desires both Water without a glow is like a glow without water And so he desires both Hope without yoke is like yoke without hope And so he desires both A crown without a home is like a home without a crown And so he desires both A stem without its root is like a root without its stem And so he desires both 8/5/2013 For Russell Sivey's "Dreams" Contest

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Date: 3/5/2014 9:37:00 PM
Abdulhafeez This is a creative write. I like how you compared the desires of men in each line. Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my Birthday poem.
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Date: 5/11/2013 5:28:00 PM
Nicely done. I enjoyed reading it this evening. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love the contrasts and the way man is portrayed as being full of contradictions. SuZ
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