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And It All Fell Apart

The room that surrounds me It gradually turns to gray The face I had been so fond of It slowly fades away My bruises are hidden by my deepest fears My eyes are covered to hide the tears You turn to me And you slowly say, 'I'm sorry, but today its your last day'.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/20/2009 4:13:00 PM
every poem that i read from you was nice keep it up
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Date: 6/20/2009 12:38:00 PM
welcome to the soup! Very touching verse! keep on writting. Light & Love
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:57:00 AM
Super sad poem Charlotte, a warm welcome to you on Poetry Soup>>James
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Date: 6/18/2009 7:01:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlotte. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:11:00 PM
Welcome to PS glad to have you aboard! This is a great write you got!
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:30:00 AM
oooooo...Creepy.Love You babe!:p
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:46:00 AM
Definitely last day.sad poem but love the message at the end.great
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:20:00 AM
oh shocking! so emotional, all of us sit on the edge of this fear every day. So well done.
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:12:00 AM
it's sad it the last day. I love your flow of rhymes and the flow of words…. I love this passionate, emotional piece. Keep writing charlotte, I left you a soupmail please check it.
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:25:00 AM
The sadness of this poem is felt even though the exact subject is not clear. -One love my friend
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