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And it all fell apart

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And it all fell apart

The room that surrounds me
It gradually turns to gray
The face I had been so fond of
It slowly fades away

My bruises are hidden by my deepest fears
My eyes are covered to hide the tears

You turn to me 
And you slowly say,
'I'm sorry,
but today its 
your last day'.

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  1. Date: 6/20/2009 4:13:00 PM
    every poem that i read from you was nice keep it up

  1. Date: 6/20/2009 12:38:00 PM
    welcome to the soup! Very touching verse! keep on writting. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/19/2009 11:57:00 AM
    Super sad poem Charlotte, a warm welcome to you on Poetry Soup>>James

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 7:01:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlotte. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Welcome to PS glad to have you aboard! This is a great write you got!

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 10:30:00 AM
    oooooo...Creepy.Love You babe!:p

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 9:46:00 AM
    Definitely last day.sad poem but love the message at the end.great

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 9:20:00 AM
    oh shocking! so emotional, all of us sit on the edge of this fear every day. So well done.

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 9:12:00 AM
    it's sad it the last day. I love your flow of rhymes and the flow of words…. I love this passionate, emotional piece. Keep writing charlotte, I left you a soupmail please check it.

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 8:25:00 AM
    The sadness of this poem is felt even though the exact subject is not clear. -One love my friend