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And I Lingered There

And I lingered there... felt the breeze; such rush of air and I couldn't feel the need to care just my hands in wading; no despair as my head fell to the ground and new strangers had gathered 'round I couldn't smile or feel a sound my eyes felt wide but shutting down and with bright light fading to hymn I felt my soul go up; no sin and with no thoughts to hush my skies I pondered how, a why; to cry but then, last touch had cave me in for I saw her, hands so cringed and then I wanted to stay more how I love her...such adore and with my eyes closing so slow and with my mouth wanting word: go I had to leave my heart for last cause with my body she'll have to pass... And I lingered there.

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Date: 3/8/2011 7:02:00 AM
there are two interpretations that i see, so i will pass and let it be.
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:03:00 PM
a lovely write,, enjoyed this one,,.p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2010 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful and very touching ..sensitive Jessica.. so good to see u posting ..hope u are well .. enjoyed your creative write tonight ..with luv..
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