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And He'll Be Mine

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And He'll Be Mine

I saw him look at me,
I saw him look twice!
I'd love for him to ask me,
Oh, it would be so nice!

Oh! Perfect timing!
Here is a slow song!
Finally, it felt like
The wait was so long!

Whats this? Why didn't he ask?
Was he afraid?
And then right there,
My hope began to fade.

I saw him dancing 
With another girl,
The thought of it
Made me want to hurl.

But I love him!
How can this be?
Why did he ask her?
Why did he not ask me?

Am I too ugly?
Too fat?
I wasn't going to dance by myself,
So I sat.

A second seemed like a minute,
A minute seemed like an hour.
Oh! My night 
Turned very sour.

And then I thought,
I shall not whine!
Eventually they'll break up,
And he'll be mine!

Copyright © Zelda Cane

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  1. Date: 2/14/2011 4:22:00 PM
    Bobby Rydell sings in his song "Forget Him". That is good advice. Chances are, you have no physical defects. It's just that the competition out there is stiff. There's a man out there for you. Just keep looking. You describe everything here quite well with some good rhyming.