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And a Good Morning To You Too

I stepped outside by sheer routine To find the paper in the green As usual I must shake it off A soggy mess, so it's a loss Now sprinklers smack me in the eyes My PJ's soaked, (one more surprise)! And bunny slippers, are wet again I shuffle back up to my den But find the door has locked and then My neighbor waves, with stifled grins He helps me through the window screen All the while I want to scream! I settle for the TV news Oh dear! ... The world is torn in two! So now I have the morning blues! I turn it off, and start my brew The window frames the early sun The boiling pot is almost done I let the cat out, drink my tea I spy a mirror, who is she??! I have a laugh as well I should I'll drink the day, and digest the good!
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/6/2014 4:38:00 AM
Enjoyed the humor, congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:39:00 AM
I simply love this... awesome write. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:00:00 PM
Great last line Carrie. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:55:00 PM
Wonderful humor, Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:34:00 PM
This brought a smile to my face, even though I'm more a morning coffee person. Congrats on your win,
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Date: 11/5/2014 2:49:00 PM
Hi Carrie, I love the charming and funny elements in your poem! Such a contrast to "carpe diem" usually expressed with so much seriousness, yet the lesson comes through so strongly. Congratulations on your top place win! Sandra
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Date: 11/5/2014 10:27:00 AM
Creative and unique work that placed in the winner's list..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:40:00 AM
love the humour here many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2014 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on a big win with this delightful write.
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Date: 8/31/2012 7:59:00 PM
Big tickle here, my friend... loved it! Congrats! Love and hugs, Jack
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "a Morning Couplet" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:52:00 PM
Well done... oh that's so funny. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:56:00 AM
Look at it this way Carrie...it couldn't have got any worse! (Or did it?)...3rd to last line doubled me over with laughter! (but I pulled a muscle in the process)...Congratulations, my friend
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on another fine win xx
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:33:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a lovely win for this glorious country morning.
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Date: 8/26/2012 3:24:00 PM
What a gas!! Great fun and glad u can laugh at yourself out loud, Carrie! Pure enjoyment! gwendolen
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Date: 8/26/2012 3:12:00 PM
Congratulaations - enjoy your laugh every day.
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:27:00 PM
Too silly..I don't think I can GET in the basement window any more? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/17/2012 7:45:00 AM
And a very good morning to you Carrie. I see a winner in this one. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2012 6:40:00 AM
All the best Carrie this will do well xx
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Date: 8/17/2012 1:30:00 AM
Carrie ha ha I like it, as long as every day isn't like this, good luck..David
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Date: 8/16/2012 10:03:00 PM
hahaha. You had to get right back into bed after the first couple of minutes. Nice one, Carrie. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 8/16/2012 9:45:00 PM
why thank you...PD
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Date: 8/16/2012 8:05:00 PM
Cute write, Carrie. I like it. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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