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Ancient Guardians

Primordial wood
Sheltering the cells of life 
That shall sustain us







*Inspired by Raul Moreno's contest, "Solace in Nature".

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 8:44:00 AM

Very nice flow here, I enjoyed the write...Well done. RdP

Elaine George

Date: 10/11/2009 4:03:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful ! Donna. Love, Lainie

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/9/2009 8:45:00 PM

Evocative view of nature! I think that "White Bird" is allegorical although I think I did that without intent. As I am sure you know when you write things come out that you did not expect to put there in your initial thoughts. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 4:21:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara

Gareth Stockwood

Date: 9/25/2009 1:21:00 PM

clever short but exxtremely powerful, congrats

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/19/2009 12:38:00 PM

Thanks for the support of my contest Donna...Raul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/16/2009 4:31:00 PM

yes..primordial nice word! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 2:53:00 PM

Clever Haiku Donna, another winner in my eyes>>good luck in the contest>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/14/2009 4:53:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your heartfelt poetry today Donna. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Sue Mason

Date: 9/13/2009 1:23:00 PM

Awesome write here, Donna and a definite winner for Raul's contest!! Good Luck!

Date: 9/13/2009 10:35:00 AM

Interesting perspective. The title is fitting for the poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2009 5:49:00 AM

Very interesting perspective on the protection offered by trees that live for hundreds of years. Where would we be without the oxygen they produce and the habitat they provide for all God's creatures? Good luck in the contest, Donna! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 9/13/2009 2:10:00 AM

Hi Donna Very thought provoking and well written. Good luck in Raul's contest. Love Light Truth Patricia