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Ancient fruit

And there you are my tasty fruit
Emerald life stretches from the root  
Lush grape vines growing upward to reach the sun 
Sun blessed one by one 
Dripping wet morning dew 
Sugared sweet tasty too
Late August harvest time shall be near 
A fresh bowl on my lap glazed where I peer 
Summer kisses gardens flourish 
In my mouth and body it did nourish

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  1. Date: 11/7/2008 8:16:00 PM
    Lovely, I was looking for an apple in eve's hands and wow! Quite a fascinating write. Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 5:41:00 AM
    very descriptive I can see and taste the fruit as I read. There's a fruit tree in the yard across from my yard and no one lives there so the fruit is ripe for picking.

  1. Date: 8/3/2008 11:25:00 AM
    Very vivid and tantalizing. Well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 8/2/2008 9:28:00 PM
    Beautiful descriptive, dear laura. Lainie

  1. Date: 8/1/2008 6:14:00 PM
    Time to hit the fridge after reading this tasty poem. Vince

  1. Date: 8/1/2008 7:59:00 AM
    Laura, you have painted quite a vivid picture of the mouth-watering fruit of the vine my friend. I've noticed a minute typo in line 2 the word "streches" I believe should be "stretchs" However, it is still a very beautifully writen piece and truly a pleasure to read and review :-)Thank you for sharing, God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 7/31/2008 12:05:00 PM
    Laura, the rhyme scheme in this is perfect as it makes the read so smooth. Your imagery of the fruit and the lusciousness of it is wonderfully vivid. Michael

  1. Date: 7/30/2008 4:52:00 PM
    Oh this is just too tempting. My mouth waters for such luscious fruit off the vine. Such imagery. There is no doubt of your delight in partaking of this enjoyment. Well written! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 7/29/2008 6:58:00 PM
    so sweet they taste. a very nice pome enjoyed reading it and makes me want to go eat some grapes right off the vine. thank you for your comments on my poetry.