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An Immortal Love

Hiding within the feathers of an angels wing My love waits, shy to the world Content to fly, never wanting to stay Until I met you Now I shed these feathers To lay with a mortal angel Whose love Will forgive my fall from grace For my heaven now resides In the being of you I have traded immortality for your kiss A mortal kiss soft, moist, like the birth of a rainbow, Leaving me with no fear My sacrifice to love, But love is a feast And illusions dance in its shadow And temptation has a price For my angel danced with destiny Now I stand on the precipice alone An outcast from heaven With broken wings that can fly no more The west wind has deceived me, took her away Like so many broken hearts before me And my dreams follow in the salt Of a billion tears This lost love I keep locked away Filling a fools emptiness Deep within my soul Now and then it escapes Consuming me in hopeless longing A trigger for Suicidal thoughts, In the darkness, just before dawn. A burden to my being, never to be lifted. This love is my only Companion For angels do not look upon me anymore This burden is mine to carry To slow my walk through The Valley of death For love is my cross But it is a thing of beauty to show God And perhaps within my suffering He will understand That love and loss is the price We angels pay for Living a mortal life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/24/2012 10:40:00 AM
thank you for your kind words to my wife and her poem . she is able to read with me tonite and has enjoyed your work very much. she has a long road ahead to recover but she loves her fellow poets. Ron.
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:37:00 PM
So good to find you Steven and read your words. Thebeginning was so positive then is became sad as so many love affairs turn out. Not what we thought when they began. Temptation surely has a price. I lovely poem that I enjoyed. Lizzie
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:16:00 PM
A beautiful and romantick poem Steven.(Every star in the sky are angels my friend)- Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/25/2012 2:57:00 PM
Excellent poetry my friend. Michael
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