An Image

clearly 
looking through the fog i see it
clearly
i picture the image of me 
walking tall
confident
swaying my hips 
and licking my lips tempting myself
to look forward
Squarely my eyes become one with me
slipping me the eye of approval
checking my view
enjoying the sight of might
stomping out that ego...
all feminine
pure estrogen 
hmmm...looky looky looky here... :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/15/2009 6:33:00 AM
You go girl! Ain't nothin' like supreme self-confidence to get you through the day!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/13/2009 11:48:00 AM
man.... can amagine that, I had a jamaican girl friend years ago... any way enjoyed reading this poetry and enjoy your day. Dont forget to check out my funny poem, The chocolate chip conspiracy.
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Date: 1/12/2009 5:56:00 PM
So creative! I've been reading some of your other poems, (after you commented on mine, which I appreciated so much :)) ...and I don't know how I've missed so many of your wonderful pieces. You have a gift, a way of writing that is unique...I will be looking more often for your name. I'm glad I found your poetry! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/8/2009 12:40:00 PM
Creative view. The informal style works well to convey your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:35:00 PM
Very good write. well described and the poem flowed so sweetly.
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