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An Abc Love Song

Leaves have fallen around us throughout these many years Mist has clouded our eyes with vapors of vast confusion... No one told us then, how storms might come, how skies would gather tears Or how the sun would often hide, and seem to disappear Perhaps those years, might have done such harm, to have shattered our illusions Instead, we lean into each other's arms, and will stay until conclusion...
________________________ For Alfred's Contest: ABC of Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/27/2015 4:09:00 AM
I don't understand the ABC form, however this is sweet
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Date: 1/5/2015 4:50:00 PM
This poem reminds me of a story teller, which is the like of myself. I love story telling and I see you do also. Please contribute more.
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:00:00 PM
Lovely flow and words perfectly describe a relationship. Well written and my favorite line "Instead, we lean into each other's arms, and will stay until conclusion..." Wonderful ending :)
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:51:00 AM
Carrie, A late congratulations on Alfred's ABC of love contest... very lovely... Love * Linda
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:35:00 AM
Belated huge hearty congratulations on your top win my dear friend, Carrie! You really write so well & I love your poem. I'll fave it if you don't mind. Thank you so much and have a happy weekend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/3/2013 4:01:00 PM
Just wonderful! I didn't stand a chance LOL, seldom do with you in he running congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2013 1:35:00 PM
This is going to my fave list....so good, Carrie!
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Date: 5/30/2013 4:51:00 PM
I do love this romantic, heart felt song ;} fav's
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Date: 5/25/2013 9:11:00 PM
Loved it Carrie ...Seren
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Date: 5/25/2013 7:24:00 PM
Love this Carrie!Beautifully penned.
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Date: 5/25/2013 4:56:00 PM
Carrie....great one...AGAIN!
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