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Below is the poem entitled AMONG OUR MINDS which was written by poet Astro Pherik. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Behind our eyes
out of sight
another world exist before our mind.
Deep inside the conciousness our mind becomes altered.
I see everything so clearly, all sitting in a different solitude ...but as one all searching all seeking...
All tormented by former unseen scars.
A dimension, invisible to us as we reach out and touch...
All falling into the same realm as we feel the ease of ecstasy.
Among the living and the internal burning of the soul.
The existence of another world, I wish to partake of this divine enlightenment .
Struggling between the light and dark/We are all as one in many different engagements with beauty.
A new truth that allows me too see this reality in a new day/ Addiction to another 
realties fading.../ Sleep soundly as our subconscious lives among our minds. Widend preceptions, as old flesh disenegrates, this is the new conception, spontaineous remission in to the new world, sleep walkers..wake up to self awareness, This is the concious evolution. 

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  1. Date: 4/4/2009 5:55:00 AM
    This is very well written. Iwould like to see some more. Wellcome to the soup. it is so true there is another world existing that we can not see.. but you do.

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 11:25:00 AM
    wonderful stream of thoughts! dreamlike! love it! Jim