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The Lord gave me peace and rest And I was lofty and sustained Then, he left me alone To my depression And my fears Then, the Lord gave my soul comfort I was mighty and blessed Then, the pain again Lost within myself And my fears Is this the endless way it will be Lord? Either one or the other Always changing Flying above Or in agony _____________________ November 8, 2012 Poetry/Verse/Always Changing Copyright Protected, ID 11- 434-376-08 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Date: 11/10/2012 2:47:00 PM
wonderful write again, my friend. Sad but so well expressed
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Date: 11/9/2012 12:11:00 AM
Well written Constance! When emotions are on a constant seesaw it is hard to function and questions abound as to why. You've brought it out well.
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:36:00 PM
I can feel the pain in every line of this poem.
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Date: 11/8/2012 5:30:00 PM
Hi Constance. Yes, life can be a roller coaster. I hope your "Flying above"s far exceed your "in agony"s. One thing I can attest to, however, whereever you are on that roller coaster ride, your talent and intellect always shines through in your poetry. Be well. Joe
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Date: 11/8/2012 5:29:00 PM
Such pain you show within this write my friend! I hate to see you suffer in agony Constance, I hope your prayers are answered and for you to find peace and happiness always, and never suffer the depression or loss again! This poem expressed exactly how you were feeling very well! I got your descriptions and they created images within my mind of how you have been feeling! What a fantastic and intriguing piece, Great Work!!
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