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Along Cherry Blossom Lane

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tiny parachutes

free-falling in the wind...

pink stars at sundown
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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/22/2013 6:59:00 PM Carrie, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA Login to Reply

Ray Dillard Date: 4/22/2013 8:39:00 AM Simply beautiful! I loved it so much more than my own! RAY Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 4/21/2013 9:15:00 AM Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Carrie! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/21/2013 2:00:00 AM Many congratulations Carrie, love this xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/20/2013 11:32:00 PM I just loved it!!! Congrats, Carrie. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/20/2013 7:24:00 PM Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/16/2013 1:53:00 AM wow!Wondeful! Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 4/13/2013 8:17:00 AM What a sweet haiku. Not one line is out of place and each one good as the other. Classic. love, Kathy Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 4/12/2013 11:31:00 AM tHIS IS RIGID... MARvel pen~A.O Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 4/12/2013 8:44:00 AM Oh, Carrie, this haiku is stunning. I'm adding it to my favourites. Your talent amazes me! Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 4/12/2013 6:06:00 AM 'Tiny parachutes'...Perfect - Tim Login to Reply

Isaiah Zerbst Date: 4/11/2013 9:14:00 AM Cherry blossoms are beautiful, and this poem is even better. Wishing you well in the contest. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/11/2013 6:25:00 AM SO AWESOME Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/11/2013 3:29:00 AM love this love the visual, and all the different aspect that come to mind... Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/10/2013 7:16:00 PM Dear Carrie, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations, I have read many of the Cherry Bloosom entrees..Not only could I see the"Tiny parachutes "as I walked with YOU:I could smell the Pie.Thank-YOU for YOUR much appreciated comment on my POEM "The Backside of Killington Mountain. I could have written about MT.Shasta in the same regard.Sorry I have not spoke with YOU in so long. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry Login to Reply