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Along Cherry Blossom Lane

, tiny parachutes free-falling in the wind... pink stars at sundown ________________________________________ For Cherry Blossom Contest: Sponsored by Black Eyed Susan

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 6:59:00 PM

Carrie, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Ray Dillard

Date: 4/22/2013 8:39:00 AM

Simply beautiful! I loved it so much more than my own! RAY

Len Gasun

Date: 4/21/2013 9:15:00 AM

Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Carrie! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/21/2013 2:00:00 AM

Many congratulations Carrie, love this xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 11:32:00 PM

I just loved it!!! Congrats, Carrie.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/20/2013 7:24:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 4/16/2013 1:53:00 AM

wow!Wondeful!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/13/2013 8:17:00 AM

What a sweet haiku. Not one line is out of place and each one good as the other. Classic. love, Kathy

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/12/2013 11:31:00 AM

tHIS IS RIGID... MARvel pen~A.O

Heather Ober

Date: 4/12/2013 8:44:00 AM

Oh, Carrie, this haiku is stunning. I'm adding it to my favourites. Your talent amazes me!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/12/2013 6:06:00 AM

'Tiny parachutes'...Perfect - Tim

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/11/2013 9:14:00 AM

Cherry blossoms are beautiful, and this poem is even better. Wishing you well in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2013 6:25:00 AM

SO AWESOME

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/11/2013 3:29:00 AM

love this love the visual, and all the different aspect that come to mind...

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/10/2013 7:16:00 PM

Dear Carrie, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations, I have read many of the Cherry Bloosom entrees..Not only could I see the"Tiny parachutes "as I walked with YOU:I could smell the Pie.Thank-YOU for YOUR much appreciated comment on my POEM "The Backside of Killington Mountain. I could have written about MT.Shasta in the same regard.Sorry I have not spoke with YOU in so long. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry