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Along Came A Hairy Spider

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Along Came A Hairy Spider

Eight legged hairy spider
We can see it everywhere
It can’t fly but with a long and sticky web
Insects will stuck and grab it with speed

On one moonless starry night
The shadow of a spider is in sight
Combined with color orange and black
On top of the giant leaves ready to attack

On its throne between two trees
Lies a perfect web for flying insects
A home for a king with fangs so big
Perfect position for grabbing flies on twigs

June 7, 2013
8Th Place Winner
For Suz-D Contest

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  1. Date: 7/2/2013 11:39:00 PM
    glad to finally see this one and also to see you won in the contest Big congrats to you, sweetie.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 10:28:00 PM
    Maria, wonderful spider poem, congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Creative and descriptive winning work..Conrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 7:28:00 AM
    congrats on your win ;}

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Congratulations, Maria. Thanks for your visits and comments! David

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:19:00 AM
    Spider sometimes are annoying but on the other hand, they're also very helpful to us. A very beautiful poem about the spider my dear friend Maria. Good luck again in the contest my very dear friend! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
    Was it wrong of me that my hair stood up a little as I read this? This was a very enjoyable piece. But, I feel the need to stand up & get some fresh air now. lol

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 6/8/2013 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for dropping by friend Drakes.. :) so how do you feel right now? (^___^) i like spiders if it small, if big.. I'm afraid. Good day