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Alone With Me

Alone with ears too wise to hear And eyes to blind to see Dear Lord Jesus, please don’t leave Myself alone with me In darkness vengeance steals my thoughts And rolls within my head I taste the words I long to say Words better left unsaid My twisting, turning, twiddling thumbs Will not be bored for long Bad habits jump into my hands Where soon they will grow strong My feet will run to Trouble’s door And beg to come inside Where they will roam forbidden halls Built up by foolish pride Lord, please stay beside me now God hear my humble plea I’m formed of dust, and just can’t trust Myself, alone with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/6/2009 11:51:00 AM
great rite the first lines are my favorite ones sometimes we can see better in the darkness lovely rite!!!!!!
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Date: 5/19/2009 3:13:00 PM
i loved it. its awesome.
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:08:00 AM
i too wrestle often . this is a great write that i relate to. the rhyming flow is absolutly awsome! great J.O.B.
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:58:00 AM
What a beautiful poem of faith and prayer. I have been praying all night myself. blessings from above and love, you inspire me.
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:21:00 AM
Excellent flow and rhyming Anna! Your opening and closing verses are bookends to a wonderfully articulated poem. As close to a masterpiece as there is... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/19/2008 10:28:00 AM
Another fascinating piece you have here. You have a well developed skill. You are meant for this craft. Thank you for your wonderful comments...Raul
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Date: 11/19/2008 9:34:00 AM
That is an excellent poem Anna. You have a beautiful style. God has blessed you with a lovely gift. Thanks for sharing it with the world...Love Elizabeth
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Date: 11/19/2008 7:30:00 AM
What a write with true emotions. You must have a great mind to write like this. It is a lovely write and I do envy you for it.
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