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Alone Together

I could speak of life in general, But this ones for a friend. We live our lives all by ourselves, together till the end. When clouds roll in and dim the light. We need the sun to help us fight. Just like the weather, our moods do change. And alone together, we both feel strange. With eyes espy of others joy. We hope and pray, but remain coy. In silent shrowds of hopeless fear. We await a hand to wipe our tear. But time goes by and tears just dry. As we give up and don't even try. So with every fiber of my being. I hope you hear what I am seeing. And in your heart, you'll know I care. Cause I am here, and you are there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/28/2015 11:43:00 PM
We may be alone at times, but just knowing someone is thinking of us can warm the heart... I am glad that I read your poem, Robert. It is a beautiful one! Very nicely written!
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Date: 7/8/2012 2:47:00 PM
Had to come back and read this...I remembered it well. So relateable to friends across the miles...Going in my fav's !!
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:42:00 PM
I guess anyone who reads this could feel you are talking to them. Such a personal feeling to reach out and touch dear one. Justr read your comment to me and they always are so special. luv u!
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:23:00 PM
Always so nice to know you are there while I am here Robert. And yes I could be compared to the weather but mildly so. I seem to smooth out as I get older, how about you. Hugs to you, Lizzie
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Date: 11/25/2011 9:31:00 PM
Beautiful...!!! I relate...sighhhhh...
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Date: 11/14/2011 4:04:00 PM
this is so beautifully written and from the heart.. cory
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Date: 11/6/2011 1:25:00 AM
wow. I can't even say this is sad because it's just simply beautiful...
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Date: 10/30/2011 3:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Just like the weather, our moods do change..With some people the moods do a fast change..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and leaving a kind review..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:12:00 PM
I love your poetry as it tells a tale of feelings, emotions and captures the intensisty of the moment. You have so much talent and it is so good to read you again...million thx for sharing!
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Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 10/23/2011 6:12:00 PM
sorry typing error (intensity)
Date: 10/21/2011 12:14:00 PM
,Good morning,~ ROBERT ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2011 7:42:00 PM
This has that tinge of sadness that makes me want to cure whatever ails you Robert. And yes, I am here and hear you!
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