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Alone Or Alive

If today left me..
       Would tomorrow be my friend..
                  Alone or alive..
            A choice not answered..
        Just a daydream in my night..
            Tasting my own breath..

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/22/2012 3:53:00 PM Dear Michael, sweet lover of ours... I'm always looking forward to new friends... leaving the old ones ...is what makes life more and more confusing... your words your breath.. swim within my inner thoughts... I know how it feels to be alone and alive at the same time.... it's a voice only I can feel and taste... luv...pd Login to Reply

Doreen Wright Date: 8/17/2012 10:19:00 PM This is a deep senryu Michael! I read it twice and going to read twice more lol!! Login to Reply

Tanya Harrington Date: 8/16/2012 2:02:00 PM Intriging thought! :) Tanya Login to Reply Tanya Harrington Date: 8/16/2012 2:03:00 PM Intriguing, that is. LOL

Wilma Neels Date: 8/12/2012 8:11:00 AM "Just a daydream in my night.." I just love that line MJF.. You got me smiling with your comment on the last one, it will only be you lol love & hugs CTH Login to Reply Wilma Neels Date: 8/12/2012 8:33:00 AM No worries, I get you :)

Cory Long Date: 8/11/2012 1:55:00 PM I like where you are going with this thought of yours.. We should write a collab together soon.. Thanks for all your continued support and encouraging words ..your friend cory Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 8/8/2012 10:01:00 AM is it bad breath? if so, I have some mints ;) very pensive piece - what made you think of it? Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/8/2012 7:47:00 AM Small, but very well done....tomorrow never come.... take care of the day ! - huggs Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/8/2012 3:13:00 AM Hey Bronx Buddy, very cool my friend, I like a lot...David Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 8/7/2012 10:33:00 PM Fantastic senryu duo, Michael! Just a daydream in my night...wow, what a great line! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/7/2012 8:02:00 PM wow, what a stunning tanka, Michael. Love when you write like this!! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/7/2012 6:43:00 PM Wow the power of your words is exhilarating my friend! I am amazed at the depth of what you speak of! I've been there, oh yeah, I have! I've been deep, so I know it when I see it! Wow, Michael, I just love this incredible piece! Great Work!! Login to Reply