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Alone Or Alive

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Alone Or Alive

                 If today left me..
       Would tomorrow be my friend..
                  Alone or alive..
            A choice not answered..
        Just a daydream in my night..
            Tasting my own breath..

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:53:00 PM
    Dear Michael, sweet lover of ours... I'm always looking forward to new friends... leaving the old ones what makes life more and more confusing... your words your breath.. swim within my inner thoughts... I know how it feels to be alone and alive at the same time.... it's a voice only I can feel and taste... luv...pd

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:19:00 PM
    This is a deep senryu Michael! I read it twice and going to read twice more lol!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:02:00 PM
    Intriging thought! :) Tanya

    Harrington Avatar Tanya Harrington
    Date: 8/16/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Intriguing, that is. LOL
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:11:00 AM
    "Just a daydream in my night.." I just love that line MJF.. You got me smiling with your comment on the last one, it will only be you lol love & hugs CTH

    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels
    Date: 8/12/2012 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No worries, I get you :)
  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:55:00 PM
    I like where you are going with this thought of yours.. We should write a collab together soon.. Thanks for all your continued support and encouraging words ..your friend cory

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 10:01:00 AM
    is it bad breath? if so, I have some mints ;) very pensive piece - what made you think of it?

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 7:47:00 AM
    Small, but very well done....tomorrow never come.... take care of the day ! - huggs Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:13:00 AM
    Hey Bronx Buddy, very cool my friend, I like a lot...David

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 10:33:00 PM
    Fantastic senryu duo, Michael! Just a daydream in my, what a great line! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:02:00 PM
    wow, what a stunning tanka, Michael. Love when you write like this!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:43:00 PM
    Wow the power of your words is exhilarating my friend! I am amazed at the depth of what you speak of! I've been there, oh yeah, I have! I've been deep, so I know it when I see it! Wow, Michael, I just love this incredible piece! Great Work!!