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Alone In the Unknown Land

I am alone,in this unknown land The way back as a losers game,I played Wanna live it bravely but at times I fail.... Me who cries for the gone past,me myself call a pessimist Past which teach me a lot Life a teacher,teach me happily the sorrows... Me jealous of those happy ones Thinks its a curse alone for me or may the fate... Still my goals are firm I'm not ready to leave it for the past But for the future I am ready to fight for my life Me not a selfish ! Still want something,not for me But to help the world,The ones who are alone..........

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Diwakar Pokhriyal

Date: 6/10/2011 12:53:00 AM

Nice thought madam.....:)................nicely fought against lonliness........beautiful :)

John Freeman

Date: 3/1/2010 8:28:00 AM

My contest results are posted, Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2010 8:39:00 AM

Nivitha, thanks for supporting my contest with this poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/27/2010 5:51:00 PM

Nivitha, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2010 7:41:00 AM

Life is indeed a great teacher, Nivitha. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 7:34:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jay Loveless

Date: 2/19/2010 10:58:00 AM

i love this. i really do. amazing write. xo rain

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 11:00:00 AM

this is a good poem and it says alot; life is hard and it takes alot to get through life and come out the same person you want to be. keep your goals firm and fight for your life! =)Jo

John Freeman

Date: 1/22/2010 11:03:00 AM

I want to most graciously thank you for your support of my contest. Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 10:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Nivotha. Love,Carol

Edward Orozco

Date: 9/28/2009 12:40:00 AM

Beautiful piece! Great job on this entry- ed

Neldy Jolo

Date: 8/13/2009 10:54:00 AM

the most freedom that everybody can do in this world is to do good. i am touch..dont leave people alone...

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/16/2009 12:30:00 PM

Strangers see everything as beautiful, but also as lonely. One day you will have many friends, and your dreams will bear sweet fruit

Bryn Murphy

Date: 4/4/2009 8:42:00 AM

nice poem i really enjoyed it and thank you for the comment on my poem you and i

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/4/2009 1:27:00 AM

Nicely constructed and expressed... an ode to the selfless and the meek. Well done Nivitha! Best wishes, Keith

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/4/2009 12:58:00 AM

Welcome to the Soupland Nivitha. There is a wide room wating for you Thank you for your honest comment on my The Farmer. Ernilando

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 4/4/2009 12:33:00 AM

Welcome to the soup, eloquently phrased, and thank you for the comment on my works in progress, lol. You have talent, keep us begging for more, hun....Aleera

Arany P.

Date: 4/3/2009 10:46:00 AM

hey Nivitha, welcome to the PS! thank you and i love this write too... you have got a unique style... and your message is really cool! ~ Arany

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 4/3/2009 10:31:00 AM

Hi Nivitha... there is something descriptively quirky in your style.... the flow in this poem is made more so by this individual style... really liked the brave affirmation ! Thank you for your comment on Death and Life