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All Is Not Right

Down where the oregano blooms
      The fog is thick as milk
It is stretched out like a cheese cloth veil
     Or a dress of fine silk

The moisture drips from Oaks and eves
     Birds sing a soft morn's song 
Roosters crow across the small creek
    As if now nothing's wrong

Ah! All isn't right in our world
     Fog's covering of gray
Says wrong isn't black but shades of white
     Injustice oft displayed 

When did it become right to hide
      Sin, by sinning much more
Has God's morals changed here lately
       Will He even the score?



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  1. Date: 4/13/2014 12:02:00 PM
    Sara Such a deeply moving and truthful write. Full of meaning and honesty that makes the reader think. Thank you for the nice comment on my Antiques poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 3:17:00 PM
    This spesks volumes dear Sarah..Powerful message

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 2:20:00 PM
    this has me thinking of Paula Dean. i think they should lay off her. this whole thing has me sick. and i think they are worse than she for all the pursecution. potts shouldn't call kettles black.

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Yes, I think I got its meaning before you finished it, Sara. Good job!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 6:06:00 AM
    Beautiful poem on Gods creation so carelessly destroyed with sin and injustice. Yes, God has every right to even the score, but patiently He waits , graciously, as we strive to become more like His son.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:25:00 PM
    wonderful sampling of thick mist against a greeat poetic backdrop, sara... would love to see how this ends..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Fog could be an outstanding metaphor for the world not being right any more. If you developed this further in that vein, you could have a masterpiece. Anyway, I enjoy the imagery of it already.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 8:10:00 AM
    There is a certain surrealism to the fog. It's almost like a misleading solitude, simply covering the song of Mother Nature. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 6:58:00 AM
    I love this! You have brought the fog back into you poetry yet again...and I love it my friend! This is a very beautiful and lovely poem! I surely loved reading this amazing piece this morning! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 6:28:00 AM
    - Thick morning fog is a bit sad to wake up to ..... hope the sun will come out. - Very well written poem, by our skilled poet Sara! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Sara, this is so captivating. It really puts your talent on display... Love ya ...Jake